English 111 G/H Rhetoric and Composition
Essay 3
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E3: Documented white paper
In E3, the documented white paper, you will complete research of various
kinds to define a problem or issue, examine its origins, causes, and consequences, and
critique various approaches to deal with the problem/issue. Later, in the editorial, you
will briefly restate the problem and suggest a plan of action or a way of thinking about
the problem. Through this research, you will become something of an authority concerning
this problem/issue.
In the documented white paper, you will use research to structure an argument
presenting your position on the problem/issue and examining various approaches to dealing
with it. This will draw on chapters 9-12 in Writing Arguments.
As you begin thinking about the topic, do not pick some vague abstraction about which
you know very little or about which you couldnt care less. Make sure your topic is a
specific problem or issue, not something that would turn your essay into a report on
something like "The History of World War II." You need to pick a manageable
topicsomething that you can effectively cover in 5-7 pages.
Think about beginning in two ways. First, review the distinction made in the textbook
on page 83 between "information questions" and "issue questions." You
will certainly need information to make a good, persuasive, and convincing argument, but
you also need a purposea reason for writingand an audience before you can make
an argument. The issue question is what gives you a purpose and reason for writing. A
second place to begin is to look at the world around you, preferably at a local level, to
try and decide what problems/issues concern you. Often local issues echo larger concerns,
so you will be able to explore a problem both on the general and specific (local) levels.
There are many unresolved and difficult issues facing the people of our community, our
county, our state, our country. Are there issues or problems in your lives about which you
care enough to do some research, and which are complex enough to warrant that work? Write
something real. Write something that matters to you.
Once youve begun developing an issue, youll have to start gathering
information. As you do so, you will find that your topic will become more focused. There
are many great sources of information: the library (books, journals, newspapers,
government documents, and databases for searching), the World Wide Web (beware of
inadequate sites; make sure they are legitimate and verifiable), and people and
institutions in the community who can provide you with relevant information. This
information will serve in your papers as the evidence you need to substantiate your
argumentthat is, reasons, backing, and grounds. Dont forget the work you did
for E1 and E2; their purpose was to prepare you for this paper. Part IV in Writing
Arguments offers many suggestions and techniques for using the library to gather
information. Chapter 6 provides suggestions for field research and using personal
observations in your argument. Use all these resources to examine your issue and build
your argument.
Besides developing a topic, finding the necessary information, and constructing a
convincing argument, you will also need to cite your sources in proper fashion using
either MLA, APA, or another discipline-approved format (see Chapter 17). In general, you
will be expected to use at least five sources exclusive of the World Wide Web. At least
three of these sources must be recent (within the last five years) periodicals. These
periodicals must be scholarly or high-level journals (e.g., Atlantic Monthly, Harpers,
etc.). You may also use national newspapers such as the New York Times or Washington
Post, but these come in addition to the three periodicals mentioned above. Local or
regional newspapers are appropriate only if you are dealing with local problems or a local
or regional perspective on a larger problem. If you use the World Wide Web, make sure you
can verify and validate any claims made. Remember, as noted in the syllabus, you must be
able to provide copies of articles and materials you use in your work if requested. You
must document your sources, and your instructor must be able to examine them if necessary.
You also need to make sure your writing is clear and concise and that you develop a
thoughtful position about the issue and argue your position clearly and convincingly in
the editorial. Weve been working on these skills all semester, and now is the time
to demonstrate what youve learned. Take time to visit the Writing Center and to have
peers work through your paper with you. The more feedback you get, the better your paper
will be. Youre making an argument about something which concerns you both as a
person and citizen of a larger community. Youll have to make a logical argument (logos),
but you will also need to make use of the appeals to ethos and pathos to
make your argument more persuasive. You should use this essay as a way of learning
something new and of better understanding the process of argumentation.
While you will be discussing approaches to the problem/issue in the documented white
paper, your focus for the essay will be to discover, explore, and learn about the problem
or issue you research. The approaches to the problems will also be a part of the essay.
The editorial will then focus mostly on describing the problem/issue and laying out
detailed, specific plans of action or approaches to that problem/issue. Remember this will
be written as a follow-up to your documented white paper and will be targeted to a
specific audience.
You will submit at least one draft to your instructor for commentary. After you get it
back, consider his or her response, revise, and submit a clean draft in your portfolio.
E3 due date: ___/___ Length: 5-7 pages
Prewriting assignments
Assignment #1: proposal memo
For this essay, you will choose a contemporary problem or issue that you will study
for the rest of the semester. You will propose a topic for your instructor to approve. In
this proposal, if you have chosen a topic about which you have strong emotional,
political, or religious convictions, you will have to convince your instructor that there
is depth and breadth to your position, that you understand the issue in all its
complexity, and that your position is based on experience and knowledge. You must also be
open to other positions. The point is that you should feel strongly about your
problem/issue, but should also be able to recognize opposing points of view. You will be
doing some brainstorming work in class to help generate ideas. In your proposal memo,
describe your topic in as much detail as possible. Start with a question and talk about
ways of pursuing the answer to that question. Give an enthymeme that describes your
current stance on the topic. Discuss your plans for research in a proposal memo
Assignment #1 due: ___/___.
Assignment #2: annotated bibliography
As part of E3, you will need to do an annotated bibliography. You will read all your
sources, write short summary statements for each, and, using appropriate citation
techniques, create a bibliography. This is an important step in a white paper because it
will help you see if your sources will support your argument. It will also help you
identify sources that may or may not be useful for your paper. For the annotated
bibliography, you will need to locate a total of ___ sourcesprimary and
secondarydated no earlier than 1985.
Find the following types of sources, as your instructor directs:
___ journals, periodicals, or newspapers
___ books
___ kinds of primary researchinterviews, surveys, etc.
___ World Wide Websites
Submit your annotated bibliography on ___/___.
Assignment #3: considerations for structuring the white paper
By ___/___, work through the questions below and start writing these chunks of the
paper, identifying places that you need to develop as you learn more about your topic.
Also use these questions to focus your research. Keep your readers in mind as you make
decisions about structure and organization. Show your research questions, making sure
later in the paper to either answer them clearly or address the fact that they cant
be answered. You can use these questions as a structuring device. Your thesis statement
should define and limit your topic AND show the significance of your paper. Your
introductory paragraphs should set up the scope of your paper. Establish the papers
limits early. Remember to use logic as an antidote to bias. Your concluding sections
should pull the issue into focus. Use topic sentences to guide readers. These topic
sentences can also provide transitions between paragraphs. Produce this assignment on a
word processor; no handwritten assignments will be accepted.
Definition and background, description What is the problem and the issue?
What are the key terms to define?
When and how did this issue or problem begin? What were the original
goals?
What effect has it had?
What problems has this caused?
Critique of approacheswhy its still a problem What has been done to address the problem or issue
so far?
How successful has that been?
What needs to be done next?
Evaluation
criteria
Use the following questions about the main elements of an essay to
analyze the strengths and weaknesses of your essay. Use these questions when reading each
others essays for peer critiquing. Your instructor will be using these criteria when
evaluating your essay.
Description and discussion of problem/issue
Is the problem or issue clearly identified early in the paper?
Does the thesis statement indicate the writers judgment about the problem or
issue?
Is there enough background information about the origins and causes of the
problem/issue?
Is the discussion of varying viewpoints thorough and analytical?
Is the discussion of consequences logical?
Analysis
Does the writer summarize, present, and/or critique opposing arguments fairly and
logically?
Does the structure accommodate the audience?
Does the writer avoid logical fallacies?
Conclusions/judgments
How do the writers conclusions reflect deeper understanding of the problem/issue?
Are the writers judgments logical and based on the reported research?
Research
How smoothly is research integrated into the paper and presented in context?
Does the research indicate that the writer has discovered, explored, and learned about a
problem/issue and has discussed approaches?
Are the writers sources varied, including primary (e.g. interviews) and secondary
(books, periodicals, web sites, etc.) research?
Where does the writer use paraphrasing and summarizing effectively, using direct quotes
when original wording best suits context?
Format and documentation
Is the material from sources (paraphrases, direct quotes) attributed through proper
parenthetical citation?
Is the format of works cited/references accurate, using MLA, APA, Chicago Style, etc.?
General
characteristics of effective essays
Evaluate your essay against the course goals for English 111. An
effective essay will demonstrate these characteristics.
Critical thinking: Essay demonstrates control over conceiving
and defending a statement about a topic, including defining and limiting a topic. Makes a
clear and arguable statement about topic, developing statements logically and adequately.
Recognizes complications or alternative viewpoints. Paragraphs are sequenced and clearly
developed.
Argument, structure, and development : Essay makes an argument to an audience. Essay is structured around a
controlling idea or thesis statement. Evidence illustrates or argues the controlling idea.
Evidence is appropriate to topic and purpose. Evidence is sufficient. Audience is defined
implicitly or explicitly and accommodated through essay. Whole paper structure supports
controlling idea.
Standard edited English awareness : Language use contributes to success of essay. Vocabulary and syntax are
appropriate to purpose and occasion. Sentences vary to reinforce logic of essay. Essay
demonstrates understanding of standard English conventions, including sentence boundaries
and completeness, concord, appropriate modification, and mechanics, including spelling,
punctuation, and manuscript conventions.
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